Oct. 5th, 2010

matrya: A picture of clouds. (i walk with idiots)
"Greg threw the bottle angrily."

Adverb abuse, people. Seeing this at the end of a long scene irks because, by this point, I should know that Greg is angry. If I don't, it is the scene that needs to be looked at to see how one could convey more emotion in the scene.

Don't tell me Greg is angry, show me.

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